Feedback 2nd Draft

Filming

My first draft of filming was handed in, there are a few changes which I need to do. The feedback which I have received is that the split screens are a really good idea with the audience able to understand the plot. I am finding it really hard to find copyright free music which ties to the short film. The re filming will be done within the week but with my main actress out on uni open days i am going to find it hard to finish my film.